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The Gap - Pages 20 + 21 by Peris-Productions The Gap - Pages 20 + 21 by Peris-Productions
Pages 20 & 21

A Race.

My disciple was a
knotless thread

(Egg)

A simple tale
of life's work,

I'm going to try my luck.
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Given 2012-04-18
~Peris-Productions's The Gap - Pages 20 + 21 is a great example of the creativity of both visual and found poetry, building both the poem and the image from already present words. ( Suggested by Nichrysalis and Featured by wreckling )
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Meggie272 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That is super creative, well done.
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DailyLitDeviations Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013
Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by =DailyLitDeviations in a news article that can be found here: dailylitdeviations.deviantart.… Congratulations on your DD!

Be sure to check out the other artists featured and show your support by ing the News Article. Keep writing and keep creating.
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:icontntrekabulator:
tntrekabulator Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Professional Photographer
that is awesome :D
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:iconperis-productions:
Peris-Productions Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :D
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:icontntrekabulator:
tntrekabulator Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Professional Photographer
you're welcome :)
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:iconthingmebob:
thingmebob Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012
Nice page - it reminds me of Tom Phillips' 'Humument' - he did this with an old book and 'treated' the different pages. Nice take on it :)
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:iconbopeep2009:
bopeep2009 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
love it
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:iconperis-productions:
Peris-Productions Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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:iconnichrysalis:
Nichrysalis Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Those x's are seriously outnumbered. ;) Congrats on the DD again, just had to stop by for another look.
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:iconearl-of-grey:
Earl-of-Grey Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
They may be outnumbered, but I say that X on page 21 will reach the egg first.
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:iconperis-productions:
Peris-Productions Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Taking bets now... find out the winner in The Gap - Part Two :)
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:iconearl-of-grey:
Earl-of-Grey Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'll bet for that X on page 21, then!
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:iconperis-productions:
Peris-Productions Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
haha, survival of the fittest, God (or some omnipotent entity) favours the underdog ;) and no thanks to you! Thank you so much for suggesting my piece, stop by as often as you want :D Peris-Productions is in your debt :P
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:iconcaoimhecaer:
CaoimheCaer Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012
Haha, I had to study it for a while before I got it! Nice!
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:iconperis-productions:
Peris-Productions Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :)
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:iconcosmicwaltz:
CosmicWaltz Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Marvelous. Love the conceptual design.
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:iconperis-productions:
Peris-Productions Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :D
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:iconeppiepeppercorn:
eppiepeppercorn Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012   Digital Artist
This is so unique and fresh, very clever and interesting.
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:iconperis-productions:
Peris-Productions Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank yo very much, really appreciate you taking the time to check this out! Take care :)
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:iconkairiuxiuxdragon:
KairiuxiuxDragon Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I see what you did there, haha, clever!
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:iconperis-productions:
Peris-Productions Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
hehe thank you ;)
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:iconcharityleigh:
charityleigh Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012
Woah! This is super impressive.
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:iconperis-productions:
Peris-Productions Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:D thank you, means a lot to me!
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:iconcharityleigh:
charityleigh Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012
Thank YOU for being awesome. :)
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:iconperis-productions:
Peris-Productions Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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:iconjakit:
Jakit Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012  Student General Artist
well done, really interesting concept ^_^ <3
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:iconperis-productions:
Peris-Productions Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :D take care!
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ForeverHisWeirdo Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Kind of sad that a book was mutilated to make this but the result is very nice. It's brings out a real emotional response. *Thumbs up*
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:iconperis-productions:
Peris-Productions Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I know, I was sorry to have to do it. But I hoped that the ends would justify the means? thanks for stopping by :) take care!
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:iconforeverhisweirdo:
ForeverHisWeirdo Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I think it was worth it ^_^
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:iconperis-productions:
Peris-Productions Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you :D
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ForeverHisWeirdo Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No problem ^_^
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:iconsessyf1uffyism1n3l0l:
How long did it take you to find the right pages? This is pretty awesome
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:iconperis-productions:
Peris-Productions Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well this concept of sperm and the egg was in my mind from the offset - I have a weird fixation with fertilisation apparently (what boy doesn't though?!) - and I chose this page as it fortunately contained the word Egg! I was also lucky due to the amount of Xs and Ys on the page. Everything just seemed to come together on these two pages! :) thanks for reading! Take care :D
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:iconsessyf1uffyism1n3l0l:
I see I see. :D
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:iconperis-productions:
Peris-Productions Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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DementedlyMe Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012
:iconheplz:I like this! It's very interesting.
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:iconperis-productions:
Peris-Productions Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:D thank you!
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CannibalAlice Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012
Congrats On the DD c:
I must say this is amazing c:
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:iconperis-productions:
Peris-Productions Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:D Thank you very much!! take care!
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:iconcannibalalice:
CannibalAlice Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012
You're Very Welcome c:
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:iconperis-productions:
Peris-Productions Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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Yagamiseven Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012
interesting
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:iconperis-productions:
Peris-Productions Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
hope that's a good interesting...? :)
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:iconyagamiseven:
Yagamiseven Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012
it is, this is a creative idea, I seen it before
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:iconperis-productions:
Peris-Productions Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
yay :) thank you!
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Kanjimaru67 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012
Hey, congrats on the DD! Your work definitely deserved it! :)
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:iconperis-productions:
Peris-Productions Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks very much, really appreciate it :)
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Koukounut Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Took me a second. :iconotlplz: It's a very cool idea. Something I would've never thought of. You've a brilliant mind. :iconilikeitplz:
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Peris-Productions Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
hehe, thank you. My mind appreciates your compliment as is blushing a nice hue of brain-rouge. Thanks for reading :D take care!
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